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德蒙福特大学 (De Montfort University，简称DMU)是一所优质并富有创意的综合性大学。

作为新型大学，DMU 与传统的英国大学不同的是更侧重于未来职业发展需要的专业素质教育，每年都会吸引许多优秀的国际学生来到 DMU 就读大学本科和研究生的课程。

本文将为大家提供2017年成功申请该校计算机科学专业的优质文书一篇。

计算机专业文书范文：

Innovation has always been something that I strive to achieve. We live in a world where it feels like we have the answer to everything and the majority may be content with that; however, I am not the majority. For as long as I can remember I’ve wanted to pursue ‘the next step’ or be held responsible for ‘the next big thing’, and I feel that the passion I hold for computers equips me with the tools I need to achieve that goal. In the future I don’t want to be remembered as someone who was inspired by him/her I want to be the one who inspired; for this reason, I have never wanted to become the next Steve Jobs or the next Bill Gates instead I want to become the first Omar McNish.

点评：个人陈述首段通常是阐述对申请专业产生兴趣的原因。第一句则是文书“句眼”，“创新一直是我所努力去实现的目标”，而计算机则是实现这一目标的“tool”，观点非常鲜明且独特。

From an early age I’ve wanted to pursue a career within the computing industry. Computers have always given me a platform to emphasise my creativity and increase my general knowledge. In my spare time I often create programs in python from scratch; testing out new functions or combining old ones gives me a good opportunity to see my own progression as a programmer. Given the ever increasing technological breakthroughs we see in everyday life I’m fascinated to see what the future holds. Whilst studying my A-Levels I’ve been able to make links between my subjects, giving me a deep understanding of the fundamental ideas of computing. What I enjoyed most in computing is the challenge involved in problem solving. For coursework I developed a behavioural management program for the behavioural team and loved the opportunity. Being able to program in my own creative space was a great experience, letting me improve my ability whilst giving me the constant reminder of the passion I hold for the subject. I cannot wait to take my programming endeavours to new heights and look forward to seeing how my skills improve in the future.

点评：继续表达对计算机的热爱，连业余时间都是在拿python写程序，还有谁!该段谈到自己在计算机上的A-level学习，对这一专业的认识也随之深入——喜欢解决计算机问题时的挑战。

My A Level courses have been an important part of my life. Not only did I find them intriguing but they have been greatly responsible for opening both my observational and judgemental thought process’. Psychology especially, which has given me a new perspective on how I approach predicaments everyday. I can easily benefit from the comparisons I can make between computer systems and behavioural processes of human beings. After learning about the theories of monumental psychologists such as Milgram and Eysenck I’ve been able to incorporate various theories into my general mindset, whether that be a real life situation or a hypothetical academic one. In the summer of 2014 I decided to take ‘NCS The Challenge’. Allowing me to meet new people NCS forced me push myself to the limit, one example would be the 6-hour mountain hike in Wales. Living in university accommodation was another of my favourable moments allowing me to manage my organisation skills and put my cooking skills to the test.

点评：申请英国本科的学生通常会在文书中提到A-level课程，招生官更倾向于通过这一课程学习了解申请者的学习能力如何。申请者选择了心理学做重点讲述，并将这一学科知识与计算机联系起来，谈到了米尔格拉姆和艾森克(著名心理学家)。这一段后面的内容则是申请者在学校参加的活动与生活。

Overall doing NCS was one of the best choices I’ve ever made and wish I could do it again. I have held several part time jobs. My most recent position has been working at BHS (British Home Stores) as a sales assistant, which I started in July. Working at BHS allowed me to improve my skills; for example my interpersonal skills with the public and working under pressure. As well as allowing me to develop new skills such as negotiation skills when pushing sales.I was recently offered the role of floor manager a challenging, role which I can’t wait to tackle. My hobbies include going to the gym regularly to stay in shape, which enables me to keep a focused mind whilst also relieving stress. I also play in a rugby team as a forward it as it gives me the constant reminder of the importance of teamwork. From my university experience I hope to meet new people from different cultures whilst becoming more independent. I cannot wait for the opportunity to surround myself in the subject I feel so passionate about next year, and look forward to the challenges that university will bring.

点评：这一段谈兼职工作和兴趣爱好，举了在BHS(英国杂货店)做销售员的例子，谈了收获(收获是关键哦)，兴趣则是去健身馆和打橄榄球。

这篇文书内容起承转合做的比较好，第一段写的也很成功，整篇文章看下来简单朴实，并没有刻意去堆内容。申请者对计算机专业的热爱能够从文章中真实地感受到。