摘要：为大家带来11月4日雅思写作大作文原创范文，本场考试为政府类话题，讨论政府资助保护濒危语言是否是浪费钱，保护濒危语言的重要性，原创来自留学通邢睿赢老师。 11月4日的雅思考试已结束，现在为大家带来最新雅思A类写作真题原创高分范文，含详情解析和语料。
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雅思写作A类大作文
类型
政府类
题目
Some people think governments should spend money on saving languages with fewer speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.
范文解析
这是一道2011年的旧题，
文章结构
P1：引入话题+表明作者观点，保护濒危语言不是资源浪费
P2：对立观点语言的消逝是一种自然的进程，将资金用在其他地方会更有实际意义
P3：语言不仅是为了交流，更承载了文化、知识和记忆，保护语言是保护文化多样性
P4：语言更深层次的智慧
P5：总结重申作者观点
高分话题表达（范文中已用红色标注）
teeter on the brink of extinction
摇摆在灭绝的边缘
dying tongues
灭绝的语言
subsidize
资助
a money waster
一个浪费钱的行为
be unstoppable artificially
不能被人为地阻止
money-consuming
消耗钱的
labor intensive
劳动密集的
ineffective and intangible
无效的和无形的
poverty alleviation
扶贫
language revitalization
语言复兴
intertwined
错综复杂的
simply put
简言之
revive a language
复兴语言
culture diversity
文化多样性
a wealth of wisdom
很多的智慧
capitalize on
利用
be committed to
致力于
雅思写作原创范文
The more successful a country was economically, the more rapidly its languages were being losing and for these reasons and others, hundreds of languages are teetering on the brink of extinction and even become unfortunately extinct ones. However, the investment in protecting and preserving those dying tongues is to some extent not wasteful but necessarily worthwhile for government.
Compared with subsidizing the improvement of economy and education, funding the conservation of minority language appears to be a money waster. This is mainly because language death might be a natural part of the process of human cultural development and might be unstoppable artificially and because preventing it is not just money-consuming but labor intensive, an ineffective and intangible effort that may turn out to be meaningless. The money spent on unrewarding these activities, if invested in more significant undertakings such as poverty alleviation, AIDS combating, scientific research, etc., will be obviously beneficial to the general public and the whole society.
But this is not that simple. Financing language revitalization, on the other hand, is of cultural significance indeed and thus does worth the governments’ while. It is widely acknowledged that culture and language are undeniably intertwined and each language, more than just a means of communication, fully carries a unique culture and is the home of a nation’s mind, conveying the knowledge, thought and faith of its speakers. Simply put, when preserving and reviving a language even fewer people use, people protect the culture diversity and when losing a language, we lose a culture heritage.
Not only does reviving endangered languages financially preserve cultural diversity but it empowers humans to promote and progress in all fields. Containing an accumulated body of scientific knowledge, including about geography, mathematics, navigation, astronomy, and many more, every language is a wealth of wisdom from which future generations can fully capitalize on to spark thoughts, to solve different puzzles and problems and more importantly to develop further. In other words, without languages, there will be no knowledge on which a society relies to prosper. Therefore，being committed to preserving their dying tongues by different resources not just by money is what each governments and individuals should do.
To conclude, useless as it may seem, investing in minority language is beneficial to both culture and social cohesion rather than wasting money.
