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Some people think primary education should be supported by government, but others believe government has more other responsbilities, and education cannont be free. How do you think?

讲在开头

教育类话题是雅思写作重点考察的内容之一,其考察比例也超过了20%之重,素有考试专业户的“美誉”。除了2014年上半年,剑桥雅思抽风般地集中考察了社会职能类话题之外,其他年份无一例外地照顾教育话题。

教育类又可大致从三个角度仔细考察:1儿童教育(学前和小学),2青少年中学教育,3年轻人高等教育。这其中儿童和高等教育尤为核心,很多考题大家也都耳熟能详,比如很多孩子的课余时间都在上辅导班,导致没有自由,这好还是不好?大学该不该免费,gap year,该不该着手同等数目的男女生等等。

小编今天就跟大家分享一下学费问题,是否应该政府来承担?

正文

Communities across the globe, in common, prioritize the education, as the younger generation stands for the hope of any country, hence, there is no excuse for children to lose at the starting line due to unaffordability for education.

It embodies the fairness and equality that no one would be deprived of the right for education no matter what family or financial background people have. Many youngsters born from a family without silver spoon in mouth own the potential to become talents making great contributions to the technological development/advancement, which is beneficial to the civilization. But the reality tells a cruel truth that numerous kids or teenagers abandon/drop off from schools due to poverty; instead, they have to access the society for jobs at their early ages. It is a pity because they miss the chance for realizing dreams.

It also effectively avoids education quality gap from one school to another due to the tuition fees charged by each school. Theoretically, the teaching quality in different schools varies depending on reputation, teachers and even the facilities equipped in campus.  Because some particular schools charge higher than their counterparts, they are able to hire good teachers. In contrast, the others become less competitive especially in the rural areas. Suppose/provided the government is responsible for the education expenses, it could ensure the education fairness reducing the gap.

Without government supports, the primary education in different regions cannot be guaranteed in the light of many factors such as budgets, teaching staff and the attitudes by managements. For example, the schools in rural areas of southwest China is unable to ensure students’ safety because of their tight budgets on school bus. In 2011, many accidents occurred which resulted in large casualty of children on the way to school, when the humble school bus crashed on trucks. 16 kids died and raised the public introspection about education investment by government, otherwise, it may produce another tragedy.

In nutshell, government shoulders the responsibility for enlightening kids to think big and higher, facilitating them to realize the dreams. Primary education, as a major power for each individual to get rid of illiteracy and change one’s destiny, shall be guaranteed to be freely accessed by children.

话题解析

本题属于主流考试范畴,考察频繁,题目变化也比较多样,出题官可能将限定条件从education supported by government变成free education,甚至partially supported by government。第一个题目调整属于同义词替换,无须担心,但第二个加入partially就需要考生警觉。

免费教育对于任何人肯定都是有诱惑力,出占便宜的心理和对政府职能的期待,内心会推着我们的思绪往免费上靠。常见论点无非政府职责,教育公平公正性,保证教学质量一致。如果要从反面考虑,政府不该提供免费教育则要侧重选择教育自主性,倒逼私立学校自主经营、提升教育质量吸引生源等。

鉴于大家生在新中国、长在红旗下,极少见识过西方私立公学的优势,不推荐从反面入手,毕竟考试讲究四平八稳,只要有理有据、自圆其说、说得精彩即可,未必需要寻求独树一帜的快感,毕竟高处不胜寒。

例句摘抄

There is no excuse for children to lose at the starting line due to unaffordability for education.

没有理由让孩子们因为付不起教育而输在起跑线上。

Many kids born from a family without silver spoon in mouth own the potential to become talents making great contributions to the technological advancement

很多家境一般的孩子拥有成才的牵制,为科学的探索做出贡献。

Theoretically, the teaching quality in different schools varies depending on reputation, teachers and even the facilities equipped in campus.

理论上讲,不同学校的教学质量大相径庭,那取决于学校的声誉、教师,甚至校园配备的设施。

The primary education in different regions cannot be guaranteed in the light of many factors such as budgets, teaching staff and the attitudes by managements.

由于诸多因素的制约,初级教育在很多地区很难被保证,例如资金、教师以及管理层的工作态度。

The schools in rural areas of southwest China is unable to ensure students’ safety because of their tight budgets on school bus.

在很多中国西南边陲的乡村地区,学校由于紧张的经费无力配备校车,难易保证学生的安全。

Suppose the government is responsible for the education expenses, it could ensure the education fairness reducing the gap.

政府承担教育开支可以有效所见教育不平等的差距。

Government shoulders the responsibility for enlightening kids to think big and higher, facilitating them to realize the dreams.

政府承担着启迪孩子心智的职责,让他们刚想干做,实现梦想。

Primary education, as a major power for each individual to get rid of illiteracy and change one’s destiny, shall be guaranteed to be freely accessed by children.

基础教育是一股使人摆脱文盲、改变命运的巨大力量,政府有责任保证孩子们免费获取。

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